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Feed Back from Peer Evaluation
Genre: Rock Music
Audience: Musicians/ Aspiring musicians
What I thought:
Good use of colour, needs more text, content page to bland, alright needs completing
Feed Back:
Successes- Great use of vibrant colours and effects on cover goes well with Genre, Simple but good, good editing on the cover and DPS, Cool photo editing, Cool drawings, Unique DPS

Improvements- Enhance picture brightness on DPS, Fonts could be more Rock and Roll, Picture on DPS could be more Genre suited, Have flame effects and shouting. More colour and info on the content page. More variety of fonts.

General Comments- Like the use of Boxes on DPS, Content page to simple more photos required, use skulls, good but only content page need improvement, try different fonts on content page.

Level 3